Scene from “Shadows of a Great City,” written by Dori, July 21, 2003

CAPITOLA: He comes! The King comes!

CAPITOLA falls to her knees, facing the door.

MEDIA: Capitola, we are American. We acknowledge no king.

CAPITOLA: This is the King that cannot be unacknowledged. There is no choice when it comes to Him.

[Note in the margin in Jessika' handwriting: Are we going to get in trouble for that? I can see the Christian contingent being unhappy with us referring to the King like they refer to God.]

[Note in Dori's handwriting: Eh, they probably won't see the script. I think we'll be fine. Anyway, the King should be referred to reverentially.]

MEDIA looks at PARALEE. As she does, they move away from CAPITOLA and the door. Th...

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